Suspense isn’t just for mysteries. It’s a critical element of any successful story.
Done well, suspense uses uncertainty to make the reader feel both excited and anxious. Suspense is what keeps a reader turning the pages. It’s a sense of dread or anticipation brought on by a lack of information that keeps the reader guessing. Will she, or won’t she? Can they ever overcome the odds? Who will he choose? Will she tell the truth? Will they get there in time?
Last fall, during the Fiction I class I took via Grub Street our instructor, KL Pereira gave us five tips for adding suspense to our stories:
- Give your protagonist an explicit goal or objective: If your readers know exactly what your protagonist wants (or wants to avoid), they will be more easily hooked because they will want to know whether or not the protagonist achieves the goal.
- Raise the stakes: This is about knowing what will happen if the protagonist fails – what are the consequences? As with having an explicit goal, clarity and transparency about the stakes will go a long way toward engaging your readers. You can also play around with increasing the importance of the stakes to the protagonist. In other words, how can you make achieving the goal more important to the protagonist? For instance, if your protagonist is a young jockey who really wants to win a particular race, you could raise the stakes by having the owner of the horse threaten to fire the jockey if he doesn’t win. Or, maybe the owner is going to put the horse down if it loses one more race. You can also experiment with making the protagonist’s objective important to a greater number of people. In class, Pereira used the example of a courier having the goal of delivering a life-saving organ. In that scenario, you could raise the stakes by increasing awareness of the consequences for other people (the patient, the patient’s family, etc.) if the protagonist doesn’t achieve the goal.
- Add danger: Adding danger automatically creates suspense, but it has to be real danger. You have to be willing to put your characters in terrible situations. You have to be willing to tap into the reader’s worst fears by making your characters suffer. There are a couple of nuances to remember here. First, the danger doesn’t have to be physical. It can be emotional, psychological, spiritual, or moral. The danger might be grounded in medical issues, sexual politics, or some other tense and uncomfortable situation. Second, the protagonist does not need to know she’s in danger. Only the reader needs to know. This can actually heighten suspense because the reader will then be doing that talking-at-the-screen thing we do when watching horror movies: “Don’t go down in the basement. The bad guy is down there!”
- Add a ticking clock: There are few things more nerve wracking than a countdown. Adding a time constraint can really amp up the suspense by applying that much more pressure to an already tense situation. Think of any story with a deadline, and you’ll know what I mean. A couple of things that will help ensure that you do this successfully: a) keep checking in on the time so that your reader stays aware of the time limit, and b) you can also choose to slow time down to real time in order to draw out the action and build anticipation.
- Afflict your protagonist with an inability to act: This is kind of like throwing one more roadblock between your hero and his goal. Think about ways you can impede the protagonist’s progress toward his objective. What can hold him back – physical ability, skill level, age, parental consent, distance, etc? How can you make him vulnerable?
These are just a few ways to heighten the suspense in your story and keep your reader hooked and turning pages. For more ideas, check out these posts from Writer’s Digest:
- 5 Simple Steps on Creating Suspense in Fiction [using backstory]
- 6 Secrets to Creating and Sustaining Suspense
I also found this article by Mark Billingham to be helpful.
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36 thoughts on “Short and Sweet Advice for Writers – 5 Ways to Add Suspense to Your Story”
Excellent advice. I’m working out a detective novel. So this is the bees knees for me. Thank you. Kris.
Wonderful, Chris. So glad to be able to help out. 🙂
Thank you for writing this, very helpful 🙂
My pleasure. Always happy to share the great nuggets I learn along the way. 🙂
Thanks for the advice
You’re welcome. 🙂
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Wow, Jamie! You never stop giving me what I need., I will use them to guide my writing. Thank you.
So nice to hear. Happy writing!
Great advice. I think this is exactly what I needed to read after hitting a roadblock in my writing. Thanks so much for sharing!
Hope these ideas help you soar past that roadblock! 🙂
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Great suggestions. I always have trouble adding suspense because I like happy endings where everything works out fine.
I’m with you, Andrew. I often feel like there’s already too much stress and strife in the world, but we do need something to keep us turning the page in anticipation. Still, I don’t think the thing keeping us “hooked” always has to be unhappy. I recently stopped watching Game of Thrones because there was just way too much suspense and tension (not to mention horrific violence and gratuitous sex and nudity) for me to handle. I like a good thriller, and I like a good amount of uncertainty, but I can do without the kind of “excitement” that’s manufactured via shock effect tactics.
*steps down off soapbox*
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Welcome to the world of blogging. Have fun & good luck!
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Very glad you found it helpful. Thanks for taking the time to say so. 🙂
Great tips. I don’t write mysteries, but as you said, suspense can apply to any story, and I could definitely use more of it!
I hadn’t really thought about the role of suspense in non-mystery/thriller stories, but once we started talking about it in class, the concept made total sense. LOTS to explore. Enjoy it!
Thanks for these.
You’re so welcome. 🙂
These are great tidbits add to your story. I love the idea of a ticking clock. I’m my fantasy series a teenage girl is facing off against the enemy to save her race, I need plently of suspense!
Anything with a race against time has an added bit of suspense built in. Nice!
Good luck with your series.
Thanks for coming by.
Very good advice for an aspiring writer like myself. I’ve written poetry and short story since I was in elementary school, but I really want to write a complete novel, but I want it to be interesting. Great tips, thanks again!
I’m a beginner. Any suggestion would be appreciated.
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This part I like.
Add a ticking clock: There are few things more nerve wracking than a countdown. Adding a time constraint can really amp up the suspense by applying that much more pressure to an already tense situation. Think of any story with a deadline, and you’ll know what I mean. A couple of things that will help ensure that you do this successfully: a) keep checking in on the time so that your reader stays aware of the time limit, and b) you can also choose to slow time down to real time in order to draw out the action and build anticipation.
Hey thanks jamie.cgx.very helpful..However ill be more glad if you could help me with some pointers on the gmake of fictional stories
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I want to remember this. One of my goals for the next year is to finish my fanfiction story for Tamora Pierce’s Beka Cooper series.
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Well, I am one tired blogger—and, one incredibly excited blogger 🙂
However, even though I just watched the close encounter with Pluto (on special NASA software) with my Best Friend in Australia, there will be SUSPENSE until just before 9pm, my time…
That’s when we all will know if the New Horizons spacecraft is alive and well…
So, in honor of Pluto, here’s a re-blog about Suspense in Writing…