Lee Child’s Jack Reacher books are gems. If you haven’t picked one up (his latest is Night School) then do yourself a favor – get a copy and sit down to read it, but make sure you have a spoon handy so you can enjoy every last bit.
I’ve been asked to review Night School for a publication and for that review I’ll be talking about characterization and plot (both excellent) but for this review I want to talk about Child’s writing style.
In a nutshell Child follows the philosophy of – “less is more.”
Child uses short sentences. All the time. Instead of explaining how a situation is affecting Reacher, he’ll use techniques like repetition to “show” us, what Reacher is thinking about. Like this passage which is repeated several times as a way to describe how he views a woman he is working with:
Taller than average, but no wider.
The black dress, the pearls, the nylons, the shoes.
The face, and hair, combed with her fingers.
Reacher is literally fixated on this woman.
In just a few words we know so much about the character Reacher. He’s smart, he’s analytical, he pays attention to detail. He notices things. Think how less effective it would have been if we had been given a full and detailed description of the woman – we would have seen her from the author’s point of view and not the character’s. In stating only the important details, Child lets our minds fill in the blanks.
Here’s another passage where repetition (attention to detail) is effectively used:
“Then he dug in his pocket and gave the guy five American dollars, and asked, “Do you have a phone?”
The guy pointed at the wall. An old Ma Bell pay phone. All metal. For outside a gas station rather than inside a barbershop, but points for effort.
Reacher said, “Does it work?”
“Of course it works,” the guy said. “This is Germany. It was rewired as a normal telephone.”
Reacher dialed the number on Griezmans’ business card. From the envelope with the fingerprint. He got ring tone. The phone worked. Germany. Rewired. “
By using such clipped sentences and observations, Child leads us through the story in real life as the main character experiences it. It’s really an extraordinary writing style which not only gives us a front seat to Reacher, but which also helps the book’s pace race along.
As writers you should be constantly reading and analyzing other works. It’s part of the job. Writing in short sentences and clips may not be the best style for you, but knowing what it can do and how powerful it can be means that if you understand the technique, you can keep it in your tool box to pull out when needed.
Give yourself a treat and go read Night School but along with that spoon, bring a highlighter so that you can take notes on some of the best writing around. Trust me, you won’t be sorry.
Wendy Thomas is an award winning journalist, columnist, and blogger who believes that taking challenges in life will always lead to goodness. She is the mother of 6 funny and creative kids and it is her goal to teach them through stories and lessons.
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